[轉貼] "Delay has the child, good or bad" 英文文法訂正

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"Delay has the child, good or bad" 英文文法訂正
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Delay has the child, good or bad
Some people thought that has the child to be possible earlier to enjoy family happiness earlier, but some people actually thought that needs to have more preparations then to be possible to go to greet the new life the arrival. This is mainly because needs to consider along with child's arrival the question will also meet supports comes, but this will be testing the parents whether to have deals with any question the wisdom. Therefore often can have these wisdoms is needs between the husbands and wives with the experience the long time to be together only will then understand. As a result, delay having children is good.
The opposition is late gives birth to the child, advocated that feminine is pregnant the age is 25-30 year old best, and increases the fertility along with the age to drop gradually. However, these data is inconclusive. Because delay having child to be possible to avert many trivial matters and two person of worlds are the romantic and the warmth. Two person of worlds may feel more marriage the happiness is one kind of best choice before having child.
The person who prefer to have child early also thought that gave birth to children and so on child to be big early. Moreover the couple may enjoy the life very early and the bilateral parents may also help to educate the child. However, these must consider between the husbands and wives mental whether mature. Because the nowadays divorce rate reaches as high as percent about 40, this demonstration after marriage does not adapt proportion high scary which two people live. Therefore, two person of after marriage need long time then may determine whether the future should have the child, can give the child the good habitat.
Finally, the person who prefer to have child early thought that has good being of help to child's intelligence quotient. The scientist research demonstrated that the parents age is bigger, lives the child intelligence quotient is possibly lower. However, this theory is only the result which counts. Because the next generation must consider that parents' economic capacity can determine with the body and mind condition. The couple has the good economic capacity to be able to give the child the best life quality. Therefore, the good economic capacity is important.
Having child delay is better than having child early. Eaddy has said "The good circumstances can achievement extraordinary personality". This indicated that must have the good environment needs parents' payout. Therefore, delay having child is inevitably. Finally, having child early is very intolerable. Therefore, in my opinion, delay having child can give child the best all.


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