Over the last year, 15 percent of the car accidents involved drivers’ using cell phones and led to 130 deaths, a five percent jump from a year ago. The numbers indicate that driving while talking on the phone can be fatal. They also suggest that education alone about not using hand held devices when driving is not effective. Now, the time to impose a law banning drivers using cell phones has come.
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