[轉貼] 天啊, Introduction 怎麼寫? 3-5
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[轉貼] 天啊, Introduction 怎麼寫? 3-5
天啊, Introduction 怎麼寫? 3-5
Introduction
本文章最後由 wilyuno 於 2009-11-18 21:55 編輯
延續前面的例子，但改用與寫作主題相關的現況、趨勢吸引讀者，請看下面協體字部分，作者的立場，以淺藍色顯示:
"With over a million of hand-held devices sold worldwide every year for almost a decade, we are undoubtedly the cell-phone generation. Everywhere we go, we see people talking on their devices while walking down the street, eating at restaurants, working, seeing movies, and now even driving cars. While in most cases when and how to use cell phones is within individual rights, driving while talking is not one of them. A spilt second of getting drivers distracted because of a phone talk could lead to accidents associated with injuries, and even deaths. To protect the public on the road, we now need to impose a law banning drivers using cell phones."
人家說萬事起頭難， essay 寫作更是如此，只要下筆順，思路就開了，而現況、趨勢是非常好用、實際、簡單的開頭方式，適用在很多不同類型的寫作。不需要恨複雜的句型，也不需要很多句，有時後一句就夠，例如，我打算寫一篇說服型的essay，題目是贊成或反對ECFA，再以現況、趨勢開頭第一段:
Recently, ECFA has drawn a great deal of debates among academia, business communities, and the general public. Some argue that such an agreement or arrangement is not to our nation's best interest in the long term because of underlying soical, economical and poltical costs. Certainly, there will be costs imposed on us as we are to open our door to China-made products, manpower, and funds, but if we don't sign it, our costs would be higher.
總共只有一句的現況、趨勢，但已足夠突顯這個議題的重要性。
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