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[轉貼] 可否請大大們糾正嚴重的文法錯誤！
可否請大大們糾正小弟嚴重的文法錯誤！
Dear Sirs,
First, we are very appreciated your immediate quotation, and our manager would
like to have further discussion detailedly with you.
Our company has been founded since 2003 and specialized in selling high grade
water-cleaned machine. For the time being, we have owned 10 percent rate in the
Taiwan market of water-cleaned machine, and that will definitely grow up in the future.
It will be our great pleasure and honor to cooperate with you on marketing superior
quality Ionizer Water Machine. Our marketing plan is well-organized and above 1000
sales volume per year is prospective goal with three to five year. Everything
is perfect except that the price is a little higher than other brands in the
present market. High price may make customers have more hesitation and
consideration while purchasing.
We hope you can provide us a long-term and stable price to let us extend the
market in the beginning. Thus, US$150 for each unit will be suitable and acceptable.
As long as customers are getting accustomed your products, we can easily increase
both of our earning in the future.
Should you have any further question, please feel to let us know at any time.We are sincerely looking forward your kindly reply.
Yours truly,
xxx
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