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發表於 2010-1-25 17:47
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[問題] 句子結構的問題
句子結構的問題
有幾句翻譯想請教一下 不知道句子結構方面是否有使用不當的問題
第一句:
Besides, it was an importance parameter, called the compression ratio, that when
the compression became higher, the thermal efficiency of Stirling became higher.
此外，壓縮比也是一個重要的設計參數，壓縮比越高，Stirling引擎的熱效率越高
第二句:
From that figure, it could find that the thermal efficiency of Stirling became higher
while the thermal efficiency of regenerator became higher, the optimal thermal
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
efficiency, 21.65%, got when the setting of temperature ratio was 5 and of thermal
^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^
efficiency is 0.8.
從圖中可看出再生器熱效率越高時，Stirling引擎熱效率也越高。當溫度比為5，再生器熱效率為0.8時，有最佳熱效率21.65%
原本^^是寫成, and the optimal thermal efficiency, 21.65%, was got ........
改成 , the optimal efficiency, 21.65%, got.....
這個用法是恰當的嗎??
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